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« on: March 18, 2009, 07:17 PM »

I want to thank oldfanatic for this idea.  I am not sure how far this one will go.  I have this chapter and one for tomorrow as well but after that, I will leave it up to the readers.  This story is a little "out of the box" but my stories never stay in it anyway.     Grin

Chapter 1

   The last time Gil Grissom was in love her name was Nicole Daley, she was a beautiful blond haired blue eyed girl who liked bugs as much as he did.   
 He asked her to marry him, she said yes.  He gave her his grandmothers ring.
  When he told his mother she made him get it back, when he complained she told him that second grade was to young to be serious about any one and if she truly loved him she would wait till at least fifth grade.
  The next month the Daley family moved to the Philippines where her father got a job.
  They kept in touch for a while, the last time he heard from her she said she was getting married, his heart broke.  But that was a long time ago.
  He was not sure why Nicole came into his mind but any thoughts of the heart ache she caused was washed away by a beautiful browned eyed brunette.
  Sara has been the love of his life for two years, he has just not found a way to tell her.
 They meant in San Francisco, one look at her smile was all it took.
  His phone going off brought him back to reality.  It was the sheriff.
  Things were running at top speed at the Crime Lab where he worked, a rookie CSI was shot. 
Heads were rolling, he knew they would, he just did not think they would roll his way.
 Jim Brass was being reassigned and the sheriff told Gil he was to run the unit.   The sheriff told him to get someone to help, Gil thought of Sara.
 Gil told him about Sara and said he wanted her to handle the investigation, he wanted it handled with in his department.
  Gil made a phone call and she was on the next plane.  He needed her, that was all she needed to hear.
 She loved him too, but she was sure there was no way someone like him would want her.
 He was investigating the death of a man who at first looked like he killed himself when he heard heaven it?s self.
 She was here, she was close enough to touch.  And, despite the loss of one of his coworker, he was on cloud nine.
 Through out the course of the investigation he could not get her out of his thoughts, he knew he should not be thinking about her at this time, but he could not help it.
   She was here and he could not let her go back.  He had to some how talk her into staying.
 A plan formed in his head, he would go to the sheriff and ask him about keeping Sara.
 After all, they needed someone.  He also knew he could get what he wanted.
  Being the number one forensic entomologist in the state sometimes let him have his own way.
 The case had wrapped up, a suspect arrested.
 Part one of his plan was in place, the sheriff said Gil could hire Sara.  Now part two of it was up to him.
 The team was standing outside of police headquarters as Jim escorted the suspect out and off to jail.
 Gil stood next to Sara and whispered ?I need to talk to you.  Marco?s at 6??  She looked and him and nodded.     
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« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2009, 08:42 PM »

Great start! Keep going!
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« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2009, 09:53 PM »

So that is what he whispered, great start, update soon
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« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2009, 05:30 AM »

Oh yes, more please.

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« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2009, 09:21 AM »

Chapter 2

Gil had never been more nervous in his life.  Offering her the job will be the easy part, she had told him she was unhappy where she was.
  The hard part was going to try to find a way to tell her how he felt.  Expressing his feelings was one thing he was not good about.
  He arrived at house,  she had been as nervous as Gil has been.
  She had been offered a job in San Diego and she was thinking about taking it but she wanted to try and find out where he stood.
 ?You look lovely,? he said.  ?Thank you,? she replied giving him that smile.  The drive to Marco?s was relativity quiet.
  After they were seated and their order taken Gil ordered a wine.  They ate and talked a little, he was still trying to think of how to tell her that he loved her and did not want her to go.
  When dinner was over Sara pulled in a deep breath, ?You said you needed to talk??  ?Yes,? he said, ?Let?s go outside??  Sara nodded.
 Gil told their server they would be finishing their wine on the porch.
  Gil figured he would get the easy part over with first.  He also figured if she did not want to stay in Vegas then maybe she was not interested in him and his telling her how he felt was a moot point.
 ?Gil,? she said, ?I have been offered a job in San Diego.?  Gil?s heart fell to the pit of his stomach, ?Are you taking it?? 
?I have been tossing it around in my head,? she said, ?You know I have been having problems in Frisco.?  ?So you have not made up your mind?? he questioned.
 ?I have been considering going, yes,? she said.  Then she smiled, ?That is unless I get a better offer.?
 ?Well it just so happens that that was what I wanted to talk to you about,? he said.  ?We need a CSI here and I would like it if you would think about taking it.?  ?Hum,? she said. 
?Sara you are a great criminologist and the lab needs you,? he said.  ?Oh I see,? she said a hint of disappointment in her voice.
 Gil took her hand, ?I need you.?  She looked at him not sure in what capacity he meant.
 He still did not know how to say what he wanted to so he decided to throw caution to the wind and do it.  He took her face gently in his hands and kissed her. 
?I need you,? he repeated but this time there was no doubt how he meant it.  Sara did not answer him she kissed him.
 The kiss left no doubt what was on her mind.  Then she said, ?Let?s go back to your place.?
  Gil was hardly able to breath as he asked, ?Are you sure??  ?I have never wanted anything more,? she said.
 At the house he lead her to his bedroom, Gil looked at her, ?Sara, are ?..? 
Her kiss stopped him from saying anything else.  He pulled her close to him and returned her kiss, his hands found her buttons. 
?I love you,? he whispered.  He took her hand and lead her to the bed.
 The next morning he woke with her still wrapped in his arms.  The feel of her bare body next to his, the way she smelled the taste of her lips took him to a place where he had never been.
 He loved being with her and he was positive he was never letting her go.


This is all I have right now.  Was wondering if I should add more to it or end it here?    
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« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2009, 02:07 PM »

Great chapter!

I definitely think you should continue with this story! I love it!
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« Reply #6 on: March 20, 2009, 05:16 AM »

Totally agree, more please.

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« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2009, 07:06 AM »

Chapter 3

He felt her stir, then he felt a kiss on his chest.  "Good morning," he said.  "Morning yourself," she said, "Be right back."
  She climbed out of bed and took off for the bathroom.
  Gil lay with his eyes closed, the feeling, smells and taste of last night came back to him.
  She answered natures call and started back to the bed but stopped.  She smiled, grabbed a swig from his mouth wash and rinsed that nasty morning breath away, "Better," she said to herself.
 Gil had not moved.   Sara stood looking at him, she smiled as she thought how handsome he was. 
She needed him again in that special way, she was not going to wait for him to make the first move.
 She got back into the bed, straddling him instead of laying next to him.  She put her hands on his shoulders, ?Got ya.?
 Gil?s eyes popped open, ?It would appear so.?  He smiled at her.
 She covered his face with tiny kisses, he caressed her he loved the feel of her skin.
 Her next kiss was deep and passionate, she smiled as she found the taste of last night still on his tongue.
  He could feel the warmth of her starting to build and his manhood quickly responded.  Her kisses moved from his lips to his chest.
  ?Be gentle,? he said playfully.
 Sara  had fantasized so often about making love to him this way and this morning her fantasies were going to become reality.  Gil moaned softly as he let her take total control of his body.
 Completely drained  she fell forward and lay with her head on his chest.  Gil ran his fingers up and down her back, ?I love you,? he whispered.
 Sara moved from top him to beside him, he wrapped her in his arms.
 ?Do you?? she asked.  ?Do I?  Do I love you?? he asked not sure why she would question his feelings.
 ?Yes,? she replied.  Gil propped himself so he was looking into her eyes, ?With every beat of my heart and every breath I take.?  Sara threw her arms around his neck and kissed him, ?How can I be so lucky to have the man of my dreams love me as much as I do him.? 
 They lay just cuddling for a while.  Gil said, ?I am starving.  How about a bite??  ?Me too,? she said nibbling at his ear.  ?You taste so good,? she said.
  Gil looked at her and smiled, ?So do you but right now it is my stomach that needs to be filled.?
 He playfully pushed her aside. He got up, slipped on a pair of pajama bottoms and tossed her the top.
 Going to the  he let Hank out to pee and fixed pancakes. 
?Now Miss Sidle,? he said pretending to take on a serious tone.  ?The job interview went quite well I think, all I need now is your answer.?
 ?Mr. Grissom,? she said smiling at him, ?You never told me what the benefit package included.? 
 He stood and took her in his arms, ?All of my love for the rest of my life.?
 Sara smiled and tenderly kissed him, ?How can a girl turn down a job offer with a benefit package like that.?     
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« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2009, 05:15 PM »

Great chapter!

Who could or would turn Grissom down!
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« Reply #9 on: March 21, 2009, 06:03 AM »

I never had that kind of benefits package.

More when you can.

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« Reply #10 on: March 21, 2009, 08:33 PM »

Chapter 4

?I take it that is a 'YES'?? he said.  ?I could never let you go again,? she said smiling at him.
  ?The day you left San Francisco I thought I was going to die.?  Gil tenderly kissed her, ?I know.  I could not get you out of my mind.?
 Sara laughed, ?We wasted two years because  neither of us could say ?I love you?.?
  Gil pulled her close to him, ?I promise you that not one more minute will be wasted.  Not one more day will go by that I do not tell you that I love you.?
 ?Oh my darling,? she said, ?Do you not realize that you tell me in so many ways that you love me.  The look in your eyes when you see me, the sound of your voice, the little things that you do.  They all show that you love me and you care.?
  Gil let out a low laugh, ?I was about to tell you the same thing.?
 She kissed him.
  He pulled her down on the sofa and wrapped his arms around her.
 ?I will tell Ecklie that I spoke to you and you said you were willing to transfer here,? he said.
 ?I will tell him that you want to keep your grade level and your pay rate.  The rest will only be a matter of formality.?
  ?I will go back to Frisco and give my notice.  I have to work out a two week notice,? she said.
 ?I am going to miss you,? he said kissing the top of her head.  ?I will too,? she said.
  He let out a sigh, ?But what is two weeks compared to the rest of out lives.?
 She cuddled close to him.  ?What do we do about?. you know?? she said.
 ?YOU KNOW?? he said.  ?Us,? she said.
 ?Oh! Us,? he said.  ?Well if it was up to me you would move in with me so I could wake to your beautiful face.?
 Sara moved closer to him, ?I would love that.  But you know the policy.?
 ?I have an idea,? he said.  ?I own this townhouse here and a place out in the country.  I will tell everyone you are renting the town house because I want to stay in my country house.?
 ?But we can both live in the country house,? she said giggling.
 ?If you want to,? he said.  ?I don?t want you to do anything you don?t want to.?  ?I want to be with you,? she said, ?I want to sleep in your arms and wake to your kiss.? 
?What about the rest of your crew?? she asked.  ?For now it will be our secret,? he said         
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« Reply #11 on: March 21, 2009, 08:42 PM »

Great chapter!
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« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2009, 06:10 AM »

Great story.  I love early Gil/Sara.

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« Reply #13 on: March 22, 2009, 02:52 PM »

Chapter 5

The next morning Gil drove Sara to the airport.  ?I will get the paperwork started on this end,? he said.
 ?Me too on my end,? she said still in his arms.  He could not let her go, and she did not want to leave either.
 Her fight was called to board.   ?I have to go,? she said.  ?I know,? he said kissing her again.  ?I am going to miss you.? he said.  ?Me too,? she said kissing him again.
 ?But it will only be for two weeks.?  ?It will seem like two years,? he said.
 That statement made her laugh, ?Then I should have no problem.  I waited two years the last time for you to tell me you loved me.?
 Gil whispered something to her.  ?Gilbert Grissom!? she said.
 He held up a round trip ticket, ?I have always wanted to join the mile high club.?  Sara laughed as they boarded the plane.
 From his seat he called Catherine and told her to take shift.  ?I am taking a three day weekend,? he said.  ?Just like that?? Catherine said.  ?Yeah, just like that,? he said.
 Sara lay her head on his shoulder.
 After the plane took off Gil walked back to one of the bathrooms, a couple of minutes later Sara fallowed him.  She knocked on the door, he opened it and pulled her inside.
 Their heads bumped and they both laughed.
 ?You have never done this have you?? she asked him.  ?No,? he said.
 ?It starts like this,? she said kissing him deeply.  ?MMM,? he said as their tongues danced around each others mouths.
 Her hand found their way down to his crouch, his manhood had already started to react to her kiss.
When they finished he said,  ?Oh my god, that was fantastic.?
 ?Welcome to the mile high club,? she said kissing him.
 Sara went to her seat first fallowed by Gil.  The flight attendant just smiled.
 ?Do you think she knows?? Gil asked blushing.  Sara laughed, ?Of course.? 
 For the rest of the flight Gil buried his face each time that attendant passed him.  As they were debarking she looked at them and said, ?Hope you enjoyed your flight.?  Gil?s face turned bright red.
 She gathered her luggage and noticed he had put one of his in with hers.
 ?How long have you had this planed?? she asked. 
?From the minute you said you would take the job,? he said.  She laughed.
 They went to long term parking and got her car.  She drove to her apartment.  She called her supervisor and told him what she wanted to do.  He said he would start the paperwork.
 She also told him she was taking a three day weekend.  They spent the weekend exploring San Francisco and making love.
 Sunday night they were once again standing in an airport waiting area.  It was his turn to board, ?I will see you soon,? he said kissing her.
 ?Not soon enough,? she said returning his kiss.
 ?Welcome back Mr. Grissom,? he heard as he boarded the plane.  He looked at the flight attendant who took his ticket, it was the same one from the other flight, he blushed and quickly took his seat.     
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« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2009, 06:34 PM »

Great chapter!

So nice for Grissom to join the mile high club.  Wink Cheesy
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